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Author fact-checks on paper/paper.md: - Site area simplified to ~13,000 m2 throughout (drop pseudo-precise 13,004.65 m2, even though it's genuinely in the official brief). - Corrected a significant factual error: the two tracks are not fully independent - Track A's visitor narrative and half of Track B's merge input both descend from Salingaros' shared root narrative. Section 4 rewritten around "divergent elaborations of a shared root", with the convergence claim re-evidenced from the material that actually is independent (3 of 4 Track A narratives, Track B's second merge input, both image-generation stages). - Attributed Salingaros' image critique-loop account as self-reported, not independently verified, with image-numbering gaps noted only as circumstantial support. - Added the authors' working hypothesis for the image-register gap: partly a deliberate medium request (watercolour vs unconstrained), partly that Track B's prompts carried the full pattern+form-language text inline per image vs Track A's short distilled per-scene prompts - clearly hedged as unverified. - Fixed an overclaim that symposium participants judged both image sets; they only saw Track B's. - De-emphasized the plan-layout idea throughout (title, abstract, intro, section 7, conclusion) to read as one possible future direction in prose, not work in progress. Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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# From Pattern to Plan: A Form-Language Extension and a Live Public-Advocacy Deployment of LLM-Mediated Pattern Language Synthesis
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# Two Languages, Two Tracks: A Live Public-Advocacy Deployment of LLM-Mediated Pattern Language Synthesis
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Bruno Postle¹ and Nikos A. Salingaros²,³
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Bruno Postle¹ and Nikos A. Salingaros²,³
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complementary, jointly necessary instruments. We generalize the bespoke
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complementary, jointly necessary instruments. We generalize the bespoke
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prompting used to produce this project's form-language grammar into a
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prompting used to produce this project's form-language grammar into a
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reusable, placeholder-driven template, and validate that it generalizes to
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reusable, placeholder-driven template, and validate that it generalizes to
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an unrelated typology, region, and climate. From one shared pattern
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an unrelated typology, region, and climate. From a shared narrative root
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subset and form-language grammar, two authors independently ran the
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and a shared pattern subset and form-language grammar, the two authors
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method to completion, producing two narratives and two illustrated image
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produced two divergent elaborations — two narratives and two illustrated
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sets (13 watercolor-register images; 25 photo-realistic images) that
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image sets (13 watercolor-register images; 25 photo-realistic images)
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converge on compatible design moves while diverging sharply in visual
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— that converge on compatible design moves while diverging sharply in
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register, for reasons we have not yet isolated. We report informal peer
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visual register, a divergence we attribute partly to a deliberate
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reception of this work at a public symposium, including a substantive
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difference in requested image medium and partly to a difference in how
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critique from a practicing architect that the method, as run, produced
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much of the source material each image-generation prompt carried. We
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"flavors, not solutions" because no single coordinated floor plan
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report informal peer reception of this work at a public symposium,
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underlies the independently generated images. We discuss this and other
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including a substantive critique from a practicing architect that the
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limitations, and propose — without yet prototyping — an explicit
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method, as run, produced "flavors, not solutions" because no single
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plan-layout generation stage as the method's next needed instrument,
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coordinated floor plan underlies the independently generated images. We
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mining spatial-adjacency information already implicit in the pattern
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discuss this and other limitations, and note — as one possible direction
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subset.
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for future work, not yet attempted — that an explicit plan-layout
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generation stage could address it by mining spatial-adjacency information
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already implicit in the pattern subset.
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**Keywords**: pattern language; form language; large language models;
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**Keywords**: pattern language; form language; large language models;
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human-centered architecture; generative AI in design; participatory
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human-centered architecture; generative AI in design; participatory
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The deployment: the Government of Ecuador ran an open international call
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The deployment: the Government of Ecuador ran an open international call
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(Stage 1 deadline 17 February 2026) for the architectural preliminary
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(Stage 1 deadline 17 February 2026) for the architectural preliminary
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project of the new National Museum of Ecuador, on a 13,004.65 m² site in
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project of the new National Museum of Ecuador, on an approximately
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Iñaquito, Quito. A winner was selected, but the winning design provoked
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13,000 m² site in Iñaquito, Quito. A winner was selected, but the winning design provoked
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sustained public objection over its failure to serve the people who will
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sustained public objection over its failure to serve the people who will
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actually use it, and — at the time of writing — is on hold and may be
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actually use it, and — at the time of writing — is on hold and may be
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abandoned. Independently of that competition, a small informal team,
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abandoned. Independently of that competition, a small informal team,
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produced, and how we generalized its production into a reusable template.
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produced, and how we generalized its production into a reusable template.
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The rest of the paper is a case study of what happens when this
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The rest of the paper is a case study of what happens when this
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three-input method is run twice, independently, from the same shared
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three-input method is run twice from a shared narrative root and shared
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inputs, in public, and then subjected to informal peer critique. Section
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pattern/form-language inputs, by two different authors, in public, and
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2 gives the background of the competition and the specific, named
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then subjected to informal peer critique. Section 2 gives the background
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failures the counter-proposal was written to avoid. Section 3 describes
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of the competition and the specific, named failures the counter-proposal
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the method extension. Section 4 reports the worked example as two
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was written to avoid. Section 3 describes the method extension. Section
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divergent tracks. Section 5 reports reception at a public symposium,
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4 reports the worked example as two divergent tracks. Section 5 reports
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including a substantive critique that the method, in its current form,
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reception at a public symposium, including a substantive critique that
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does not yet produce a coordinated plan. Section 6 discusses this and
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the method, in its current form, does not yet produce a coordinated
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other limitations honestly. Section 7 proposes, as future work, the
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plan. Section 6 discusses this and other limitations honestly. Section 7
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instrument this critique implies is missing. Section 8 concludes.
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briefly sketches one possible direction for future work suggested by
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that critique. Section 8 concludes.
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## 2. Background: The Museo Nacional del Ecuador Competition and Its Discontents
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## 2. Background: The Museo Nacional del Ecuador Competition and Its Discontents
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archive) — of which the institution states that under 1% can currently
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archive) — of which the institution states that under 1% can currently
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be exhibited at once, for lack of space. The Stage 1 open call sought a
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be exhibited at once, for lack of space. The Stage 1 open call sought a
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preliminary architectural project for a new building of at least 25,000
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preliminary architectural project for a new building of at least 25,000
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m² on a 13,004.65 m² plot at the corner of Av. Eloy Alfaro and Av. de la
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m² on an approximately 13,000 m² plot at the corner of Av. Eloy Alfaro and Av. de la
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República in the Iñaquito parish of Quito, diagonally across from La
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República in the Iñaquito parish of Quito, diagonally across from La
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Carolina Park — one of Quito's most-visited public spaces, itself drawing
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Carolina Park — one of Quito's most-visited public spaces, itself drawing
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on the order of 400,000 visits a month — with direct access to the La
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on the order of 400,000 visits a month — with direct access to the La
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that the template captures a reusable *shape*, not a repackaging of
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that the template captures a reusable *shape*, not a repackaging of
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Ecuador-specific content.
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Ecuador-specific content.
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## 4. Worked Example: Two Independent Deployments from Shared Inputs
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## 4. Worked Example: Two Tracks From a Shared Root
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### 4.1 Shared Inputs
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### 4.1 Shared Inputs, Including a Shared Narrative Root
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Both tracks reported below share exactly two upstream instruments plus a
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Both tracks reported below share the same project-specific pattern
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condensed brief: a project-specific pattern subset of 55 patterns from
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subset of 55 patterns from Alexander, Ishikawa, and Silverstein [2],
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Alexander, Ishikawa, and Silverstein [2], curated using the APL-Companion
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curated using the APL-Companion web tool described in [1] and prepared
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web tool described in [1] and prepared for this project by Salingaros;
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for this project by Salingaros, and the same Ecuadorian Form Language
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and the Ecuadorian Form Language Grammar described in §3.2. Both tracks
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Grammar (§3.2), condensed brief, and named-failure critique (§2). But the
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also drew on the same condensed brief and the same named-failure critique
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two tracks are not two independent runs from those inputs alone: they
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described in §2. From that point, the two tracks are independent LLM
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also share a common narrative ancestor. Salingaros' first prompt to an
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runs, by different authors, producing different outputs.
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LLM (see Data and Materials Availability) combined the pattern subset,
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form language, and brief into an initial design narrative, *Casa de la
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Memoria Andina*. This document is the root both tracks below grow from,
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not merely a shared set of abstract rules: Track A's shared "chassis"
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document (its own set of fixed invariants — site data, the
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material/color/ornament systems, named circulation realms, and where
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each part of the collection lives) adopts it as primary source, and
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Track A's general-visitor narrative reproduces its prose almost wholesale
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(§4.2); Track B's final narrative is this same document merged with a
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second, independently drafted narrative from a different LLM (§4.3). The
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two tracks are consequently better described as **divergent elaborations
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of a shared root** than as fully independent runs — a distinction that
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matters for how the convergence reported in §4.4 should be read.
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### 4.2 Track A: Four-Stakeholder Narrative Synthesis
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### 4.2 Track A: Four-Stakeholder Narrative Synthesis
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wrote four separate experiential narratives, one per stakeholder
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wrote four separate experiential narratives, one per stakeholder
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viewpoint (general visitor, museum staff, school group, and
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viewpoint (general visitor, museum staff, school group, and
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indigenous/community stakeholders whose heritage the collection
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indigenous/community stakeholders whose heritage the collection
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represents), each independently grounded in the shared pattern subset and
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represents). Of these, the general-visitor narrative is substantially
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form-language grammar, and cross-checked against a shared "chassis"
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the shared root narrative described in §4.1, reproduced with only the
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document of fixed invariants — site data, the material/color/ornament
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minimal adjustments needed for consistency with the settled chassis; the
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systems, named circulation realms, and where each part of the collection
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other three were written independently against the same chassis and
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lives — so that a detail asserted by one stakeholder's narrative (a
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pattern/form-language inputs, without directly reusing the root text.
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material, a color, a named place) is never contradicted by another's.
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The four narratives were then combined **in full**, not condensed, into a
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a detail asserted by one stakeholder's narrative (a material, a color, a
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named place) is never contradicted by another's, then combined **in
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or grammar codes, since it is written to be read by the public, not by
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practitioners. Thirteen illustration prompts were written, each
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self-contained (the full shared style guide pasted literally into every
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written to be read by the public, not by practitioners. Thirteen
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prompt, not cross-referenced), and generated externally via Midjourney,
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illustration prompts were written, each self-contained (a shared style
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producing images in a **warm architectural watercolor and gouache
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guide, distilled from the form-language grammar into plain descriptive
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register** — a painted presentation drawing, not a photo-realistic
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### 4.3 Track B: Single Merged Narrative
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### 4.3 Track B: Single Merged Narrative
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Ecuatoriana*, merged from an initial LLM draft and a second LLM pass
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### 4.4 Convergence and Divergence
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### 4.4 Convergence and Divergence
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| Narrative structure | 4 stakeholder-viewpoint narratives, combined in full | 1 merged narrative |
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| Narrative structure | 4 stakeholder-viewpoint narratives, combined in full | 1 merged narrative |
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| Relation to shared root narrative | visitor narrative = root text; other 3 written independently | root text merged with a second, independently drafted LLM narrative |
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| Output document | `docs/counter-proposal.md` | `docs/3.Casa-de-la-Memoria-Ecuatoriana-*.txt` |
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| Output document | `docs/counter-proposal.md` | `docs/3.Casa-de-la-Memoria-Ecuatoriana-*.txt` |
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| Image generator | Midjourney | ChatGPT |
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| Image count | 13 | 25 |
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| Image count | 13 | 25 |
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| Image register | watercolor / gouache illustration | photo-realistic |
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| Consistency mechanism | shared chassis document (invariants) | iterative natural-language critique loop |
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## 5. Reception: Informal Peer Engagement at the July 2026 Symposium
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images of a design, not a coordinated plan. What the symposium adds is an
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unsolicited, on-the-record confirmation from outside the authors' own
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unsolicited, on-the-record confirmation from outside the authors' own
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team that this gap is the one that most needs addressing next, which is
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team that this gap matters. We return to it in §6.1 and note one possible
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the direct motivation for §7.
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worth taking seriously if this method is to be used for participatory
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worth taking seriously if this method is to be used for participatory
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design rather than only advocacy communication.
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### 6.3 Unexplained Divergence in Image Register
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### 6.3 Partly-Explained Divergence in Image Register
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As reported in §4.4, Track B's photo-realistic images are judged more
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compelling than Track A's watercolor-register images by both authors and
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authors' own assessment, more compelling than Track A's watercolor-register
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by symposium participants, despite both tracks sharing the same pattern
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images — a judgment the authors have made themselves, not one
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subset and form-language grammar. We flag this honestly as an
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corroborated by outside reviewers evaluating both sets side by side. We
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unresolved variable of the method's current image-generation stage,
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attribute the divergence partly to a deliberate difference in requested
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not as a property of one generator being categorically better than the
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medium (photo-realistic vs. watercolor/gouache) and partly to a
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other — the two tracks differ in generator, in prompt style, and in how
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difference in image-prompt content (the full pattern-subset and
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much each image is asked to carry unaided (13 broadly-scoped prompts vs.
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form-language documents fed inline to each Track B prompt, versus a
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25 more narrowly-scoped prompts including deliberate parallel color and
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short distilled style guide for each Track A prompt), on the working
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material-cost variants). Isolating the cause would require a controlled
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hypothesis that ChatGPT's greater tolerance for long, dense prompts
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comparison outside the scope of this paper (see §7).
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let it resolve more of the form language directly into each image. Both
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factors are plausible and neither has been isolated from the other or
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from any residual difference in generator capability — a controlled
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### 6.4 Unsettled Questions of Authorship and Structural Readiness
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### 6.4 Unsettled Questions of Authorship and Structural Readiness
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imagery remain unsettled in general, not resolved by anything specific to
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this project.
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## 7. Future Work: Toward an Explicit Plan-Layout Layer
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## 7. Possible Future Work
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The critique in §5 — that the method, as run here, produces "flavors, not
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solutions" because there is no shared floor plan behind the independently
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the method, which we note here briefly without committing to it or
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generated images — is the clearest and most actionable finding this
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having attempted it: an explicit plan-layout generation stage, inserted
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deployment produced, and we take it as the method's next required
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between the pattern-subset/form-language inputs and narrative
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instrument rather than a criticism to be argued down.
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generation, that would make the spatial and adjacency relationships
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already implicit in the pattern subset (building complexes, wings,
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connected buildings, circulation realms) explicit as a shared layout for
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narratives and images to be checked against, rather than each
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independently inventing one. This is a proposal in prose only — no
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prototype has been built for this paper, and we do not treat it as the
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method's necessary next step so much as one plausible answer to a real
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critique among others an architect might reasonably prefer.
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We propose, without yet prototyping, an explicit **plan-layout
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A separate, lower-priority open question is the image-register divergence
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generation** stage inserted between the existing pattern-subset/
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of §6.3: a controlled comparison isolating requested medium from
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form-language inputs and the narrative-generation stage. The pattern
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prompt-content length would help settle how much each contributes, but
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subset already encodes spatial and adjacency relationships implicitly —
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is not required to support this paper's central claims.
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patterns concerning building complexes, wings, connected buildings,
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circulation realms, and entrance transitions are themselves claims about
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how spaces relate to one another — and the project-chassis document used
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in Track A already names specific circulation realms and collection
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placements as fixed invariants. The proposal is to make this implicit
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spatial information explicit: prompt an LLM to derive a bubble-diagram or
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adjacency layout directly from the pattern subset and brief, before
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narrative generation, so that subsequent narratives and image prompts —
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whether one combined narrative or several stakeholder narratives, as in
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this project — are *derived from* one shared layout rather than each
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independently inventing a version of it. This would not, on its own,
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produce a buildable plan; it would produce a shared spatial scaffold that
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narratives and images could be checked against, directly narrowing the
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class of discrepancy described in §6.1.
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This is proposed as future work in this paper. A separate, exploratory
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prototype of this idea exists as an open, lower-priority research task
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outside this paper's critical path, and may be folded into a revision of
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this section if it produces something worth reporting before publication;
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its absence does not weaken any claim made above.
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A secondary, lower-priority open question is the unexplained image-register
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gap of §6.3: a controlled comparison — the same narrative text and the
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same style-guide language, run through both generators — would help
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isolate whether the gap is attributable to the generator, the prompt, or
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some other variable, but is not required to support this paper's central
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claims.
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## 8. Conclusion
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## 8. Conclusion
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between the human/organizational and geometric/tectonic languages of
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between the human/organizational and geometric/tectonic languages of
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architecture — which we generalized from a bespoke, project-specific
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architecture — which we generalized from a bespoke, project-specific
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prompting process into a reusable template and validated on an unrelated
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prompting process into a reusable template and validated on an unrelated
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project. Run twice, independently, by different authors, from the same
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project. Run by two authors from a shared narrative root and shared
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shared pattern subset and form language, the method converged on
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pattern subset and form language, the method's two divergent elaborations
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compatible design moves while producing genuinely different narratives
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converged on compatible design moves in their genuinely independent
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and a qualitatively different, currently unexplained, image register.
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material, while producing a qualitatively different image register, a
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Presented to informal peer scrutiny, the work drew a substantive
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difference we can partly, though not yet fully, account for. Presented
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critique, not only praise: that the method, as deployed, produces images
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to informal peer scrutiny, the work drew a substantive critique, not
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without a coordinated plan behind them. We agree with that critique, and
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only praise: that the method, as deployed, produces images without a
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propose the explicit plan-layout instrument it implies as the method's
|
coordinated plan behind them. We agree with that critique and take it
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next necessary extension. Design knowledge, once written down as
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seriously; §7 sketches one possible response without committing to it as
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the method's necessary next step. Design knowledge, once written down as
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readable rules rather than embodied only in a single expert's intuition,
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readable rules rather than embodied only in a single expert's intuition,
|
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can be executed, checked, criticized, and revised at the speed of
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can be executed, checked, criticized, and revised at the speed of
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conversation — but a pattern language and a form language, however well
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conversation — but a pattern language and a form language, however well
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executed, are not yet a plan, and the honest next step for this method is
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executed, are not yet a plan, and this deployment's clearest lesson is
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to build the instrument that makes them one.
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that the method should say so honestly rather than let illustrative
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|
images stand in for one.
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---
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---
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- Condensed brief and named-failure critique:
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- Condensed brief and named-failure critique:
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`ref/brief-condensed.md`, `ref/critique-failures.md`
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`ref/brief-condensed.md`, `ref/critique-failures.md`
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- Shared invariants ("chassis"): `ref/project-chassis.md`
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- Shared invariants ("chassis"): `ref/project-chassis.md`
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- Shared root narrative and the prompts that produced it:
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|
`docs/Casa-de-la-Memoria-Andina-National-Museum-Narrative-Kimi.txt`,
|
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|
`docs/salingaros-narrative-prompt.md`
|
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- Form-language prompt template: `templates/form-language-prompt-template.md`
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- Form-language prompt template: `templates/form-language-prompt-template.md`
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- Template validation on a second project: `templates/examples/sheffield.md`
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- Template validation on a second project: `templates/examples/sheffield.md`
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- Track A narratives and public document: `narratives/01-visitor.md`
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- Track A narratives and public document: `narratives/01-visitor.md`
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