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Bruno Postle ac056ae21e Revise paper draft: fix narrative provenance, hedge unverified claims
Author fact-checks on paper/paper.md:
- Site area simplified to ~13,000 m2 throughout (drop pseudo-precise
  13,004.65 m2, even though it's genuinely in the official brief).
- Corrected a significant factual error: the two tracks are not fully
  independent - Track A's visitor narrative and half of Track B's merge
  input both descend from Salingaros' shared root narrative. Section 4
  rewritten around "divergent elaborations of a shared root", with the
  convergence claim re-evidenced from the material that actually is
  independent (3 of 4 Track A narratives, Track B's second merge input,
  both image-generation stages).
- Attributed Salingaros' image critique-loop account as self-reported,
  not independently verified, with image-numbering gaps noted only as
  circumstantial support.
- Added the authors' working hypothesis for the image-register gap:
  partly a deliberate medium request (watercolour vs unconstrained),
  partly that Track B's prompts carried the full pattern+form-language
  text inline per image vs Track A's short distilled per-scene prompts -
  clearly hedged as unverified.
- Fixed an overclaim that symposium participants judged both image sets;
  they only saw Track B's.
- De-emphasized the plan-layout idea throughout (title, abstract, intro,
  section 7, conclusion) to read as one possible future direction in
  prose, not work in progress.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-07-24 22:46:04 +01:00
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docs Document Salingaros' parallel narrative/image/article material in CLAUDE.md 2026-07-24 19:12:05 +01:00
narratives Condense brief, mine critique failures, extract chassis, write all four narratives 2026-07-18 21:16:22 +01:00
paper Revise paper draft: fix narrative provenance, hedge unverified claims 2026-07-24 22:46:04 +01:00
ref Extract Nikos Salingaros Theory of Architecture 2026-07-24 18:46:47 +01:00
templates Move Sheffield form-language test out of docs/ into templates/examples/ 2026-07-24 21:53:43 +01:00
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CLAUDE.md Move Sheffield form-language test out of docs/ into templates/examples/ 2026-07-24 21:53:43 +01:00