Author fact-checks on paper/paper.md:
- Site area simplified to ~13,000 m2 throughout (drop pseudo-precise
13,004.65 m2, even though it's genuinely in the official brief).
- Corrected a significant factual error: the two tracks are not fully
independent - Track A's visitor narrative and half of Track B's merge
input both descend from Salingaros' shared root narrative. Section 4
rewritten around "divergent elaborations of a shared root", with the
convergence claim re-evidenced from the material that actually is
independent (3 of 4 Track A narratives, Track B's second merge input,
both image-generation stages).
- Attributed Salingaros' image critique-loop account as self-reported,
not independently verified, with image-numbering gaps noted only as
circumstantial support.
- Added the authors' working hypothesis for the image-register gap:
partly a deliberate medium request (watercolour vs unconstrained),
partly that Track B's prompts carried the full pattern+form-language
text inline per image vs Track A's short distilled per-scene prompts -
clearly hedged as unverified.
- Fixed an overclaim that symposium participants judged both image sets;
they only saw Track B's.
- De-emphasized the plan-layout idea throughout (title, abstract, intro,
section 7, conclusion) to read as one possible future direction in
prose, not work in progress.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Full draft at paper/paper.md following the agreed outline: abstract,
background on the Museo Nacional competition, the form-language method
extension and its templating/validation, the two-track worked example
(Postle narrative/Midjourney vs Salingaros narrative/ChatGPT), July 23
symposium reception (including the "flavors, not solutions" critique),
drawbacks, and the proposed plan-layout future work. Reception quotes
checked against the transcript; content adapted from Salingaros' partial
process-report article where applicable. Not yet submission-ready --
needs author review and a formal reference list.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
